```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

[Muhammad Khalil]

:)

[DIL]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

hmmmmmm very neat work :) .............aik ghalti hai :( ......bataon kia? :eye:


aur yeh kuri ki akhiyan bari sohni hain :)

[*Rida*]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

wah....buht khobsorat ashaar hai

ghalti tu hai :)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

Han plz batain ....................aur yeh kurii ko apun janta hay..

[DIL]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

Han plz batain ....................aur yeh kurii ko apun janta hay..

Haan ji sohni akhiyon wali hai zaroor jantey hoon gaye waisay buri baat hai her kisi ko janany ka dava nahi kertay :na:



dosrey misray main "woh" ko "ho" type ker gaye app ..............

[Wafa]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

wow composing aur sheir dono bohot hi zabardast....:thmbup:
aur jo galti hoi hai usse theek kar le....:D

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

main pehly b bata chuka hun k idont like shaires....lakin coposing ka shok hay
aur main parhta hun hun likhty wakat siraf yehi dekhta hun k aya 2 ya 4 line pori hu gai hain:mm:

[ASAD]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

Nice Composing..............

[ADNAN.S]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

very nice........ yeh pic colours main bohat khobsurat hai aap ne black & white kiyooon use ki?????????

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

hummmm cos k mery pass nahi thee color

[Khushi]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

wow...mera favourite qat'a
aur composing bhi khub hai

[fari]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

nice one !!!!!janab

[Aania]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

good one :)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

shuker khawateen o hazrat

[DIL]

Re: ```Osy Bhulany k ba'd bee```

main pehly b bata chuka hun k idont like shaires....lakin coposing ka shok hay
aur main parhta hun hun likhty wakat siraf yehi dekhta hun k aya 2 ya 4 line pori hu gai hain:mm:

Khalil Pa'a! aisay to shairi ki mut mari jati hai :tauba .............aur jab tak shairi main dilchaspi na ho composing maza nahi deyti ..........main jo kuch apni pasand say compose kerti hoon aur jo kisi contest yeah kisi ki request per un main numaiya farq hota hai................... behas nahi ker rahi bus aik baat zehan main ayii jo kah dali bura lagaye to maazrat :)